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Jan 1, 2006, 4:51:49 AM
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Yoko in her Daughter of Evil gown!!

Taken at Taiyou by :iconj-o-i-ful-cosplay:
Thank you so much!
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Ok, although I'm kind of biased cuz of friendship, I'm going to do this as all-around fair as possible.

First of all, I love the angle. Joi always does a great job of that, so kudos to the photographer, but your choice of pose is also really great. It allows all the best details of the costume to be seen - the gold on the front ruffles, the lacing up the back, and the GORGEOUS train that can't always be seen from the front.

Basically, it's a great show of your worksmanship.

Your facial expression is also really perfect. The enhanced color of the lips and contrast of the eyes is very well done. Your cheekbone is also rather prominent, and adds a more regal appearance to the shot. The expression overall is very fitting for this version of Rin, and I wouldn't change a single thing about it!

The composition is also very nice, with you not completely in the center and the train making up the corner of the shot.

I think the ONLY thing I could POSSIBLY recommend as constructive criticism is only to take down the saturation a little bit on the grass and your hair.
Because those two parts are so color-intensive by nature, when the vibrance is "upped" to make the other parts of the shot extremely gorgeous, it pushed those tones a tad overboard.

I could go into how you could avoid that technically, but I don't want to be boring, and it's a tedious process ;__;

Keep up the amazing work!!
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:iconmdarrer:
so gorgeous, beautiful gown!
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~SpicyTacoCosplay Mar 28, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Thank youuu!! >//<
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:iconmdarrer:
you're welcome, I love Daughter of Evil Rin, her gown is so beautiful!
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~SpicyTacoCosplay Apr 4, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
I do too! I hope to add a little more detail on this too! <3
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:iconmdarrer:
hope you do, would love to see
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~SpicyTacoCosplay Apr 5, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
:) Thanks!
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:iconmdarrer:
you're welcome
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:iconrintheamazingninja:
So gorgeous! ♥♥
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~SpicyTacoCosplay Jan 17, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Thank youuuuuu!! ;A;
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:iconrintheamazingninja:
You're very welcome~! ♡
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